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SCREENPLAY for Mustang Sally
Executive Produced by Electronten Pictures, Written, Directed, Produced by Ronnie Shantz/Robinson, Starring Ronnie Shantz/Robinson as Ronnie And The Electrons.
FADE IN:
The PICTURE fades up to Ronnie And The Electrons sitting on a park bench. Contemplating, puzzled, he drums his fingers a moment, looks at the CAMERA, hesitates and picks up his cell and dials, knowing something isn't right.
Ronnie E. Hey... you finally naswered. Where've you been?
(listens, then) Out with the girls again.. (oh really) Ooohhh....
(listens, then) Ah. And Jimmy's place, again. Every night. Oohhh...
((cuts someone off) Well. I wrote--did this song. For us. I want you to have a listen It'll just take a few minutes. Just take a listen. Here goes.
Cool, classy, Ronnie E. puts on his shades and cranks up the song, already knowing the result, plays it through and finally ends with the storyline conclusion, knowing it made its point. He picks up the phone again, removing his shades.
Ronnie E. (vain grin)So.... what'd you think?
He waits for a reply. Silence. His grin fades.
Ronnie E. Hello? (beat) Hello... ?
Finally realizing his Girl has hung up--
Ronnie E (realizing) Oooooh...
--Ronnie E. puts the dead phone down cluing in his Girl moved on. With Jimmy. Absorbing his misread, he looks into the CAMERA with no visible anguish, anger, etc and... just lets her go.
Ronnie E. Well, that's that.
Reflecting a moment, he picks up his glasses, keeping his composure.
Ronnie E. Sayona.(staying cool, classy) It's been real, Baby.
Still confident, someone who knows how to absorb love rejection, Ronnie E. puts on his shades, gets up, moves in on the CAMERA, and as his guitar engulfs everything around drowning out the world except the end of their relationship...
FADE TO BLACK
Etron Music, Mustang Sally budget: 550$
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